En 8: Tuesday, 15 May

Today we worked on paragraph # 2 (and some worked on paragraph #3).  I am enjoying the chance to work with you one-to-one in the editing/revision process.  I continue to be very satisfied with the effort and progress that you are making.  Who would think that you would stay engaged in the writing process to effectively over such sustained periods of time.  Keep up the great work - there is no homework.