Thursday, February 3, 2011

En 12: Notes from Thursday, 3 Feb

Today we did a writing workshop and looked at what makes for good paragraph writing.  Please have Book One of 1984 read for Monday. 

Please remember to post a comment with your example of a super closing sentence.

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  1. In a world so dark and forlorn, we wonder if it is an actual place, or a ghastly state of mind where all hope is lost.

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  2. As Winston lives in this corrupted society the fear of BIG BROTHER grows inside of everyone.

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  3. Much like himself, Winston's worth seems frail as each of his days is lived out in fear.

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  4. This leaves us wondering if society can stay as free spirited as it is now, or is it just a matter of time?

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  5. In a world with so much fear and hate, it's only a matter of time before rebellion.

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  6. Through thick and thin where Winston's been
    No other world has "looked so cold",
    Restored with sin and posters pinned
    'Big Brother is watching you" In bold.

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  7. How is one sopose to live when their privacy and own thoughts are taken away?

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  8. Ah...THAT is the question!

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  9. When a mans own thoughts are taken from him and he can't even make his own decisions, is he truly a man or just an empty shell?

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